A few minor typos I noted:
Chapter 2, Part 2, near the end:
“cel phone”
“whose to say” (should be “who’s to say”)Chapter 3, discussion on blocks:
“shoot” should be “chute”Good eye. All repaired. Be sure to join the mailing list when it
enters existence.starch
fwiw, I like the errors. I like them unedited. It seems so natural… poetic
in some sense 
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kind regards -botp